In the Spring Mist


in the spring mist

all the birdsong on high

it marries the rain


This poem was written in response to March 7, 2018: Rainy Forest, which is the first(?) great prompt at Seeds and Sand. The prompt and poems can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Howling Wolf –

4 thoughts on “In the Spring Mist

  1. First of all …. love the Howlin’ Wolf! 🙂

    The image is perfectly spring-y. I like how you’ve included “it” — “it marries the rain” — one little word and you’ve got your kireji. Very nicely done 🙂

    • Well, I thought I’d best be a bit ‘technical’ for the first haiku at a new prompt – so, a kireji and a 1st-3rd switch it was 😉

      And what a great HW performance!

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