The Black Tear In It


the black tear in it

before the white dress before

I knew the bride


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #1229 Yin & Yang, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s the Ronettes –

3 thoughts on “The Black Tear In It

  1. I love how you turned a thought topsy-turvy … and made it bittersweet. Dark, even. Paired with the Ronettes? Especially so.

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