on Brighton beach
I can’t see you anymore
splinters tell the boat
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This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #1222 Beach, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Emmylou Harris, the only person on the planet who can wear tasselled gauntlets –
Nice take !!!
Thanks, Milan, glad you enjoyed it 😉
Welcome !!!!
This one sounds so sad, but in a way this one is a real masterpiece Blake.
Thanks, Chèvrefeuille. There aren’t many sadder images than a shipwreck..
So sad. So much left for us to imagine. Really well done.
Thanks, Sarah Ann. I wanted a haiku with a sense of heartbreak but without any people involved 🙂