through thinner
birdsong the thin
drizzle falls
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This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #1161 Matsuyama City birth-place of Shiki, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Tom Waits –
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This is gorgeous….
Thanks, Jen – those little birds do love an opportunity to go singing in the rain [cue major dance number in the trees of Shenley Brook End…] 🙂
Lol!
Nicely crafted
Thanks, Chèvrefeuille – slightly experimental with the line breaks here 🙂
Emotive. I like it. 🙂
Emotive is definitely what I was aiming for – glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Well done! 🙂