loose
on the yellow sunset
December ravens
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This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #881 following Basho into the deep north: Mount Atsumi; a hot day’s sun; Kisagata silk tree, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here.
And, to finish, here’s Cream, complete with ludicrous introductory voice-over –
Ludicrous, sure … but I now know that Eric Clapton designed stained glass 😉
Quite an image, and powerfully worded too. I really like this one, Blake 🙂
Yep, we certainly all learned something… [strokes chin and gazes into the middle distance, earnestly..] 🙂
Thanks, Jen – wanting to let more space into haiku at the moment, let them breathe..
staring into the middle distance … lol….!
breathe, eh? well, nicely done — it works 🙂