Thin Leaves


thin leaves say

this dreary November sky

falls off


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #20 Paradox, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Tim Hardin –

7 thoughts on “Thin Leaves

  1. Beautifully penned… I like the idea of the sky falling down… when presumably leaves should do so in autumn…
    Great approach in your perspective, dear Sue
    All my best wishes. Aquileana 🌟

    • Thanks, dear Aquileana. Absolutely, that’s how it usually appears though I thought for a leaf it might appear that the opposite’s the case – assuming that leaves are like us and put themselves at the centre of the universe 😉

      I’ll be over to enjoy another mythology refresher shortly 🙂

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