twists of sun

a feather’s gold fall

in shadows, out


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #862 Vistas, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Bob Dylan –

9 thoughts on “Twists

    • Thanks, Jen, I’m glad you like it. Written after staring at Chev’s photo of an eagle until a feather started to fall 🙂

      And yes, it felt like it was time for his Bob-ness to make an appearance. In fact, I was planning to include a Jeff Buckley version of a Bob song in the next post – which was going to be for the B&P Shadorma prompt, except…trying to get a shadorma together made my head ache this evening! Haiku had the same effect, I remember, when I started writing them. I think I’m allergic to new literary forms 😉

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