In a Mess


in a mess

of howling at her shoulder

the bared winds


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #858 Throat Songs of the Steppes, another great prompt at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Joy Division –

3 thoughts on “In a Mess

    • The weather lends itself nicely to ‘layers’, doesn’t it? It’s built into the language – under a cloud, stormy relationship, etc. Though I must admit I hadn’t noticed the bared shoulder 🙂

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