The Vivid


the vivid death

of October leaves, their yellows

seem breathable


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem Special #177 Cor van den Heuvel’s “a tide pool”, three favorite haiku, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Cat Power –

8 thoughts on “The Vivid

    • Yesterday was the hottest November day on record in the UK, apparently. And the yellow leaves were gorgeous when I went for a stroll..

      I’m glad you’ve had some autumn loveliness too 🙂

      • Yep it was sunny this morning and my yellow leaves in front are still stunning but it is raining this afternoon…still not complaining as it is warm…well for Quebec, 10C is warm for November.

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