As the Moon Lowers


as the moon lowers

its staircase of echoes

two bats spiral up


This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem Special #170 Michael Dylan Welch’s 1st roar of the midway, another great prompt from Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s the Kings of Leon –

9 thoughts on “As the Moon Lowers

  1. Wow…. this image leaves me quite speechless …. I do like the staircase of echoes!!!! And the bats make an appearance — so what’s not to like about this haiku! 😀

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