In Her New Robe

 

in her new robe

the spring rain

unfolding

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This poem was written in response to Carpe Diem #744 a river breeze, another great prompt hosted by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s Fairport Convention –
 

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13 thoughts on “In Her New Robe

    • Well, I’m all for breaking the classical rules if it lets us add an extra dimension to a haiku, but I still think you need to know how to apply the rules in the first place – otherwise you’re not actually breaking rules you’re just bumbling about, tripping over 17 syllables like a drunk tripping over the pub steps!

      Thanks, dove 🙂

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