If Wine has a Sound


if wine has a sound –

the crash of spring breezes

through fresh leaves


This poem was written in response to Heeding Haiku With HA: Spring, another great prompt hosted by HA at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here. And, to finish, here’s the Rolling Stones –

10 thoughts on “If Wine has a Sound

    • Oh I like that. Are the vines empty because all the grapes have been drunk? It makes me think of Bacchus 🙂

      Since I started writing haiku I’ve always envied how you and Jen can just pluck a haiku out of the air as an instantaneous response to someone else’s writing. I still don’t know how that’s done..

      • Wow .. What a compliment Blake. I couldn’t tell you how I ‘pluck a haiku out of the air’, it just seems to be there shouting at me, if that makes sense. 🙂

      • Well it seems to me that you’ve got a very strongpoetic voice and you write lovely haiku … so … you’ll be plucking haiku in no time indeed!

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