River Freezing


river freezing

and the whirligig says “pah!” –

no-one’s impressed now


This poem was written for Carpe Diem “Little Creatures” #13, “The Whirligig “, another great prompt hosted by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here.

7 thoughts on “River Freezing

    • Phew this is ages old – how strange to see it again 😉

      A rare attempt to adopt a tone that has some echo of our friend Issa (as picked up from your good self!). It’s quite fun, isn’t it? It’s tricky, though, bringing ‘characters’ into a haiku – for me, anyway 🙂

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