Dusk eases in –
Another marriage falls
Into place or apart
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This poem was written for Carpe Diem #608, dusk, another great prompt hosted by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All of the poems in the link-up can be read here.
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"We're all out there, somewhere, waiting to happen."
…. into place or apart …. the big question at dusk ….
Nicely written 🙂
Indeed..
I wanted a middle line that was left hanging.. and a last line with options, just for a bit of drama 😉
Very much up-to-date – when lots of marriages crash – so did mine – I like your poem 🙂
Thanks, Birgitta. I’m glad you liked the poem, which does feature new relationships as well as old 🙂
Cycles are finite, indeed… Cheers dear Sue ⭐
Aquileana 😛
True, the cycles reach their end… but then they tend to start up again! 😛